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Poetry, creative writing and a desire to inspire….. Hebrews 11:1 – Now faith is confidence in what we hope for and assurance about what we do not see.

Maze of Thoughts

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Beautiful mind
A penny for your thoughts
Shall I meet you in your maze of thoughts
Put your head on my shoulder
And we will walk this trail of thoughts
Light precedes us, we will not get lost
We can make small talk along the way
The thoughts of the mind can be multi layered
The maze will twist and turn
There will be a few dead ends
But we will walk through this array of thoughts in your mind
Confident, all will be clear
And we will soon see that heart smile of yours again
I so love the shine from your beautiful mind

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Author: syl65

martial arts films, music, poetry, and hockey. this is just a little of who I am. Spirit of the Living God, alive inside of me. Never stop dreaming....

38 thoughts on “Maze of Thoughts

  1. Reblogged this on Takeshi's Flight and commented:
    “The maze will twist and turn
    There will be a few dead ends
    But we will walk through this array of thoughts in your mind.”
    Very nice passage though. 🙂

  2. I guess there was barelyl a poem which caught me like that one. Did you write it after our conversation. It is THE match. You just gave me amazing answers or at least signposts,Syl. My mind has cleared for sure and I am convinced it is big part your credit. Thank you! 🙂

  3. Me again 😉 I printed the poem. I am reading it again and again. It has such a calming and comforting effect. It is beautiful, Syl. You convey the important feeling of understanding and accepting. This feeling that empowers again and motivates to stand up and face life in looking forward and not back anymore. I wish I could hug you for this. Just feel hugged, Syl 😀

  4. Gorgeous! I especially love the last two lines. ❤

  5. Syl, I want to show you and the community what your gesture yesterday means to me and considered to reblog this post. But I changed my mind because reblogs are not read that much. I prepared a post in which I included your poem but linked both to your blog and to the poem. Please tell me if you give me permission to do so. I scheduled the post for Wednesday.

  6. I so love the shine from your beautiful mind— you leave me speechless Syl

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  9. Hey Syl, Erika shared with me your poem on my recent post to help me out. This is a beautiful poem, I love how it’s so comforting and soothing to read, I’m glad I got to read this! 🙂

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