Syl65's Blog

Poetry, creative writing and a desire to inspire….. Hebrews 11:1 – Now faith is confidence in what we hope for and assurance about what we do not see.

4 Line Stories: Ocean View


He came here often, where he felt her presence most

When he was here, he felt so alive with her

He couldn’t understand why she wept so when they would meet

Seven months had passed since the tragic accident, he still had yet to accept his death


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Author: syl65

martial arts films, music, poetry, and hockey. this is just a little of who I am. Spirit of the Living God, alive inside of me. Never stop dreaming....

17 thoughts on “4 Line Stories: Ocean View

  1. Wow Syl! Keeping in your sharing style is what I like about you. Thought provoking 4 lines. 🙂

  2. haunting…

  3. Death can be difficult to accept, for both parts.
    Very much expressed in so few lines, Sylvester 🙂

  4. Wow! That will be haunting me for a while!

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