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Poetry, creative writing and a desire to inspire….. Hebrews 11:1 – Now faith is confidence in what we hope for and assurance about what we do not see.

Rite of Passage 



Miles and miles

The concrete stretched 

Concrete in my belief of reaching point B

Point A was so far behind me now

As if I had breached a new dimension of some sort

Life has changed so much on this journey 

Faithfully I stick to the directed path 

Stray off to much and find yourself in oblivion 

On a fast track to nowhere

Parts of who I once was, break apart from within me

Bidding a fond farewell silently 

No longer dormant and living a fabricated life 

I accept my evolution into someone new, perhaps who I have been all along 

Each step forward, each mile marker reached
I am learning, absorbing and experiencing this unearthen life 

Point B is my supposed destination 

But I am understanding quickly, there is life beyond


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Author: syl65

martial arts films, music, poetry, and hockey. this is just a little of who I am. Spirit of the Living God, alive inside of me. Never stop dreaming....

8 thoughts on “Rite of Passage 

  1. Awesome poem! When we consciously left point A there is only point B to follow and walk any path necessary to get there. Point A is lost in the fog behind but point B gets clearer with each step and so gets the knowing of what is beyond. Wonderful poem.

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