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Poetry, creative writing and a desire to inspire….. Hebrews 11:1 – Now faith is confidence in what we hope for and assurance about what we do not see.

The Visitor



Drifting silently

Wading through my mind

Close knit affection

We connect on a higher level

Kinetic love

Always in motion

Hint of blue

The sky and missing you

Unscripted melodrama

My mind is a quiet creek

You continue to drift through

I amย stationed on a makeshift stone seat

Watching and wondering if your feet are cold

Or if my mind provides warm thoughts for you to wade in

Drift as long as you like

I appreciate the visit



Author: syl65

martial arts films, music, poetry, and hockey. this is just a little of who I am. Spirit of the Living God, alive inside of me. Never stop dreaming....

25 thoughts on “The Visitor

  1. The most wonderful connection. I love that line:
    “My mind is a quiet creek
    You continue to drift through ”
    A wonderful feeling to have that freedom, to be that present, and to live such a strong connection!

  2. Loved the ‘quiet creek’ line. ๐Ÿ™‚

  3. The last line “I appreciate the visit” just put an immensely beautiful end to the poem. Love it! โค

  4. This is simply gorgeous! I love this one Syl

  5. How beautiful. Best way to connect…

  6. Beautiful place to drift here on your blog. I’ve missed you and your words. I’ve been missing B. She’s gone silent again and when I think if her I think of you. Just wanted you to know I wish you a good day. ๐Ÿ˜„๐Ÿ˜„

    • Thank you and I see you pop up on your blog when you can. Just make sure you are taking good care! Alex too! ๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜Š

      • Oh yes I am taking good care as healing seems to take some time. I’ve never been injured before so it’s taking longer than I would like. I’m learning to slow way way down. Literally it’s the hardest thing I’ve ever done but so needed. I’ve been running 90 mph for 3 straight years and it’s nice to take a little break and trust that God bring helpers across my path. He always surprises me who he sends! ๐Ÿ˜€

      • I’m glad you’re taking care and recovering good even if it’s slow. You’re in the best hands with God!

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